Praises For...

Leaving Montana - Collected Poems
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Wonderful Collection!

“Leaving Montana” is a wonderful collection, especially his poems of the homestead and family (“Postcard to my father” and “He’s bought it now”). Larum has “a unique talent for crafting images that flow and adding musicality to a poem.

“For example, the “i” sound in trill and kissing and fishing and luminous in “the trill of invisible loons kissing a lake fishing with hollow, luminous voices.” Wonderful, and wonderfully restrained — truly, as if he had just finished and was applying Hugo’s “Triggering Town.”

‘And, beyond that, the pure beauty of the way he turns a phrase:

— in “a rosary of apology mingles with the wisps of blood-scented heat”

— or “Our mother is grumbling fear, her icy stranglehold on our lives the gnawing hunger deep inside”

— or “The stars have gone home, undressed”

— or “The morning dawns brick-red”

— or “Finnish wives set out loaves to cool in the rich air while immigrant husbands churned the earth a fetal green”

— or “dark lucid hours wedged between the sleek and sliver of a moon” (from “Dragon nights,” a totally beautiful poem).

A fine, fine book.”

Timothy Pilgrim
one of the Pacific Northwest’s most prolific poets, Associate Professor of Journalism (emeritus), Western Washington University
www.timothypilgrim.org

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My Face is Still Smiling

This has been one of the better days of this dire time. I just read Glen Larum’s “Leaving Montana – collected poems.”

Oh my. My heart is still warm and my face is still smiling, if not crying.

My favorites are “When I See a Dog’s Tracks” – I’m a sucker for anything dogs;

“Leaving Montana” – Perfectly fit for the book title. (He hasn’t really left, of course.);

“At Stubble’s Edge” – Surely, he was the boy. Or he could have been;

“Teaching Trees to be Round” – I just read The Hidden Life of Trees by Peter Wohlleben, a German forester. Narrative non-fiction.

Maybe that book is what struck me about this poem;

“When the Road Turns” – dedicated to someone else, but it’s the author as well;

“Just Saying” – Still weepy about that one;

“Hitch-Hiking the Alphabet” – Just plain fun!

“Turtles All the Way Down” – I’ve never forgotten that story as he told it one day;

“He’s Bought It Now” – Now I understand the cover photo. How poignant.

Your work reminds me of my childhood friend Merrill Gilfillan (poet and short story writer).

Charlotte Slack
author and teacher, Austin, Texas

Praises For...

Waltz Against the Sky
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I couldn’t put it down!

“Exciting, intriguing, and entertaining!!! I couldn’t put it down!!!”

Jackie Boyd,
Marathon, Tx

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A Masterpiece

As characters in Glen Larum’s Waltz Against the Sky drift toward a small town in Texas, their stories are braided into a lariat that cinches their fates together. Like a Tony Hillerman New Mexico novel, Waltz puts the sere, flat landscape back into moral order by following a bloody crime, a violent chase, and a courtroom drama that entangle the lives of ordinary people. Evan Blaine, a young newspaper editor, must search beyond appearances for the truth—and how he can anchor his life’s work, and his heart, within the community. Waltz is a masterpiece, Larum, a master.

Timothy Pilgrim
poet, editor
Emeritus Associate Professor of Journalism
Western Washington University
Bellingham, Washington
www.timothypilgrim.org

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"You have to pay attention"

I enjoyed Waltz Against the Sky thoroughly and read it carefully for the way you sequenced the plot as you introduced characters and for your lovely writing. Caught myself several times mouthing yes at a description, phrase or dialogue. If I were teaching the book, I would ask my students to make a graph with the characters along the left side and the plot development across the top. You have to pay attention to details that locate the characters along the timeline. I noticed in reviews that some readers said it was a challenge at first but they eventually were drawn in by the reflection your plotting requires. Many famous books have done the same thing so I was up for it and enjoyed the process.

The themes of the book are interesting too. On p. 73, Angione remembers something a grocer had said to him during his hitchhiking: “Something will happen out there if you aren’t careful, something for no reason for all.” That is my philosophy of life too, but as it plays out, even being careful won’t always help you. Randomness is everywhere as Sheriff Fulton finds out when his plan to get his wife away to safety backfires in her tragic death. Ham Michaels’ good intentions don’t always lead to good outcomes. But randomness can lead to good as well. Blaine follows Albers to West Texas and finds Sheila.

However, my heart is with Huck Finn on his raft in the Mississippi with Jim when he has to make a decision about revealing Jim is a runaway slave. Bad luck, the abuse of power, the road taken and not taken can explain a lot of things, but quite often you have to decide who you are and what you are. Blaine makes that choice when he recognizes Dink in the newspaper and decides to let law enforcement know where he is. Consequences follow, good and bad. An interesting image comes to mind: spin the bottle. In kids’ play, all that is at stake is a kiss. In the world you have described so well, anything can happen when the bottle stops.

I enjoyed your place and character names especially when I would know the embedded reference or provenance of the name. Like the character Shotwell = Shotwell stadium in Abilene. Plus it’s grim irony about the performance of law enforcement and the violence. Congratulations for crafting a great read!

Mike Rush

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A Story Masterfully Told

Whether I was totally absorbed in the unfolding of events, enjoying the scenery described, or being reminded of my own journalism classes at Rutgers, Waltz Against the Sky was truly an enjoyable read. The novel’s flashbacks were handled so skillfully and transitioned so smoothly that they effortlessly knit together a complex storyline, and the wrap-up came as a complete and most enjoyable surprise. It was a story masterfully told with dignity by one obviously enjoying the task. I found it refreshing to see the principal character portrayed as your basic all-around nice guy enjoying his profession and, most of all, his life. Thanks for a really great story.

Bob Duppstadt,
Rutgers University ‘60
NASA contracts specialist (ret.)

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A New Master of Fiction

Glen Larum’s “Waltz Against the Sky” might have been his introductory novel, but clearly, it ain’t his first rodeo. This Permian Basin writer has crafted a tale that begins in West Texas and winds up in your brain pan.

Calling on his Montana upbringing and a newspaper career path that took him through Odessa, Fort Stockton and other ports of hometown journalism, the author has found a certain voice that rings true in brisk, authentic dialogue. Larum’s fictitious West Texas setting of Indian Springs could be Alpine or Fort Davis … or Anywhere USA, so long as it’s west of I-35.

So skillful was Larum in creating his lead characters – especially the spineless young Tony Angionne and the evil jailbird Valdez — this reviewer, even weeks after reading “Waltz,” still simmers with righteous indignation. Which is to say the coldly calculating Valdez needs to have his ass kicked, and I’d like to volunteer.

Warning: Once the author introduces the characters, prepare to keep pace. Events both heroic and dubious occur with such rapid succession, the pages fairly melt into the story. Or, is it vice-versa? Either way, do not venture into the last half of this one, unless you are prepared to race home after work each day, skip dinner and dive back into the story, to see what happens next.

The title fails to match the storyline (or maybe it’s over my head) but mark well the name Glen Larum. This guy gots game. As a freshly minted Larum follower, I look forward to his next title – “Spring Coulee,” a fictionalized account of the end of the homestead era in the West, when the rough country and demanding lifestyle chewed up and spit out a generation of Americans. After years in newspaper nonfiction, a new master of fiction is emerging and, better yet, he walks among us.

Mark S. McDonald
President
Permian Basin Bookies

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"Something to be savored"

A reader might think he’s got himself into a picaresque and then Wham-O (like the slingshot young Evan Blaine probably lusted after when he read the ads in Popular Science), some brace of characters lurches onto the stage and we’ve “got ourselves a situation.” Against backdrops that Glen Larum clearly knows down to their aromatic essence, Waltz Against the Sky takes us into that setting where someone is knitting a sleeve of the sweater in the bedroom, someone else is working on the collar in the kitchen, there’s a sleeve half done in the garage and who knows what’s going on out on the patio? It’s a luscious array of variegated characters who are presented not in a condescending paragraph but rather in little bits, inched out onto the work table then carefully moved aside as we ponder another part of the knitting endeavor. Hint: It does end up as a sweater, but you gotta be there. Read it. It’s not a galloper that will keep you up half the night. It’s more something to be savored, reflected upon, and then picked up again. We await Mr. Larum’s next work. (Full disclosure: I am mentioned in the Afterword. His words are too generous but I won’t mention it again provided he agrees to bless us with another book.)

Lee Barker
Redmond, Oregon

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Intriguing

An intriguing read, smartly written, Waltz Against the Sky beautifully evokes a fading era of journalism as young newspaper editor Evan Blaine covers a brutal crime in a small Texas town. He encounters darkly comic criminals reminiscent of an Elmore Leonard novel, police officers who play with the law as they wish, and a stalwart judge who tries to make things right for the hapless innocents as well as the perpetrators. With well-paced action and quick-flowing dialogue, the multi-layered stories of these realistic characters play into a lively plot that fuses their fates.

Carolyn Dale
writer and editor,
Emeritus Associate Professor of Journalism
Western Washington University
Bellingham, Washington
www.carolyndale.com

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Solid, good, down-home writing

“Glen Larum’s Waltz Against the Sky is the perfect depiction of how people and our times shape our lives, especially in small towns that truly are the center of the universe for a childhood or a decade or even a lifetime. To someone who knows all the roads in and out of Indian Springs, Sunlight and Rio Seco, and the era that spawned them, this is a story that’s often more fact than fiction, but the issues are ageless and without geographic significance. People everywhere have to determine right from wrong, and they will learn much on the journey. This is such a story. It is told exceptionally well through there-but-for-the-grace-of-God-go-I characters, honest evaluations and action that draws the reader into the fray.

Perhaps Waltz will stand as testament to times when enlightenment came with a heavy price and the death of an innocent became the birthplace of wisdom.

But really, it’s just solid, good, downhome writing like many of the stories we most enjoy…and remember.”

Teddye Stephan
Staff writer retired,
The Fort Stockton Pioneer

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Ahhhhhh...

Ahhhhh…one of the best books I have read in a long, long time!!!

Wally Feldt
Sports Information Director
Frontier Conference

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A Timeless Novel

Glen Larum’s literary debut, Waltz Against The Sky, is set at a crossroads in West Texas that first appears as a welcome nighttime oasis before dissolving into disappointment to reveal a town suspended in time.

Using the unique metaphor of intersecting highways, the author sets the theme in a terse prologue: “…major highways intersecting each other on the way to and from somewhere and nowhere. It is another of the intersections where people in motion pass each other, stop, rush by, or collide.”

As the novel’s title suggests, the protagonists “waltz against the sky”, moving from or toward something in a search for something better. All come to Indian Springs where the actions of Chief Deputy Matt Ridgeway and Sheriff Leo Blunt, following a strange episode with a local drunk, unwittingly serve as catalyst for the conflict and tension that follows.

You meet Evan Blaine, a young newspaperman leaving behind Montana and lost love, as he lands in this place and gets hired at the Dispatch. Del and Dink Downs are not only running from an act of patricide but, as only Del knows, traveling down the highway with a tire full of cocaine to deliver in California when they stop in Indian Springs in the wee hours of morning for gas. You come to know the happenstance hitchhiker, young Tony Angione, who escapes a murder attempt by the brothers only to land in jail on a bogus charge and then is forced to take part in an escape by his cellmate, Omero Valdez, a hard-wired sociopath who undertakes a harrowing escape using his fellow inmates as pawns.

While this may sound like a plot-driven thriller, Waltz Against the Sky is actually in all things written in literary accomplishment. Larum can quickly create a vision for the reader with a few choice words:

“…squatting at the edge of his boyhood hideout, a vague outline of a shadow hunched behind a dense curtain of brush and tall grass…”

“Early afternoon sunlight poured through the scattered canopies of huge trees in the yard and speckled the house’s sun-blotched siding.”

Throughout the novel, he graces the reader with the beauty of his brief but well drafted scene descriptions.

“I thought I would wander over to the employment office,” he said, wiping his finger on the folded tip of the napkin.”

“The motel had been a motor court when this two-lane highway was built to bypass the town’s main business district, its river rock facade and flashing vacancy neon sign inviting travelers to stop in a day when Indian Springs was famous for its springs and park…”

Glen Larum is a gifted writer with a wonderful talent that makes reading a pleasure and his Waltz Against The Sky will survive as a timeless novel that locks the readers’ attention in anticipation of what is to happen to each of its characters. They come to understand whom it is they are reading about –themselves.

We all search for something, and our paths take us to the highway intersections and crossroads of life. You turn left, and it’s a blessing. You turn right, and it’s a tragedy. One never knows what lies beyond the next turn. The author is right; we are all waltzing against the sky.

Glen Aaron, best-selling author
Vice President, Permian Basin Bookies

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Loved the Separate Plots

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your book. Loved all of the separate plots going on and couldn’t wait each reading to see what happened next. Can’t wait for the next one!

Ron Heggemeier, City Manager
Petersburg, Texas

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It sure isn't Mayberry...

As I settled into Glen Larum’s book, Waltz Against the Sky, the little town of Indian Springs felt like Andy Griffith’s Mayberry, N.C. Until it didn’t. Indian Springs, sitting at a crossroads in West Texas, ended up being more like Cabot Cove from “Murder, She Wrote.” More dying folks than you can imagine. You imagine how it all happened, however, just as though you were there. Coincidences. Possibilities. Good times. Good people. Bad choices.
Young Evan Blaine, minted in Montana, looking for a fresh start in Texas, lands a job as a reporter for the local weekly newspaper. As he learns the ropes, he thinks, “People thought towns were all different. But they weren’t. They were all the same, just in different ways.” In time, however, Blaine learns that Indian Springs is not like other small towns. He pays attention, does his job well, but still ends up tangled in a web of crooks, jail escapees, and manhunts.
Larum spins a tale and draws you in with vivid images to carry you along. You’ll see the graying lady at the newspaper office ask, “Can I help you?” without breaking the rhythm of the long scissors attacking an unfolded newspaper in front of her.
A good read. A very good read, indeed.

Charlotte Slack
author, writing consultant